W.A.L.T: make a interesting story.
Hi guys and welcome back to my, and today's blog post is about some of my writing I have done for my writing class. I really like my writing for my blog post, for my goal of writing is synonyms witch mean strong good adjectives.
This is about a patch of meerkat, trying to get there most amazing beautiful fruit from this ugly mean BIG bird. I like this story I have made and its probably my favorite, because it has a lot of interesting words!! I like the video I got it from cause it is so cute, and then at the end its so funny. But no spoiler!!
So yeah that will be it for today hope you guys like my blog post and hope you have learnt something and have a good day... BYE GUYS!!!✋
Question: Do you think I have done good in my writing??
It was a soothing dark dawn while the stars disappear through the black sky, the sun arise and emerges out from the ground and into the sky throughout dawn upon the desert savanna land so wide and dry in africa. Adorable animals on land wake up, hoping for a fresh morning to a good start of the day.
The red mercates wake up early in the morning in there shaggy nest under the ground, as they wake up altogether they do the same drill everyday. They wake up every morning to smell the fresh air outside of there holes, before doing that the next thing they do is to see if there are any predators so they can actually day routine.
If it's all clear they go outside to there precios elegant element, which is a fruit. One by one every fur ball climbs up into the tree creating a line to wait for there turn to smell the aesthetic fruit. The fruit is so attractive to them they also stare at it like there possessed just by looking at it and smelling the beautiful smell from the fruit.
There still staring at the fruit, when suddenly they see a humongous vultur. His Burnt body comes closer to land, and his wings stretch out catching the earth beneath him. He lands on the poor thin branch, almost breaking it because of the vulture weight.
