I am really proud of what I have done in my writing.
this was my bestes writing that I done this year.
and Im going to keep up with this kind of writing. And I hope you like this slide.
Friday, September 9, 2016
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Hi Blessing, I really love your story. I can't wait for the next part and see if they survive. Maybe you should prove read your post. Love your story by your sister.
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DeleteHey Blessing. I really like your story I can't wait for the next story too and maybe you can check the spelling mistakes on the bottom of your slide but anyways I really like your story by Vann
ReplyDeleteHey Blessing, I really like how you talked about the space chimp. I can't wait to comment to your next writing. Next time you write like this, check your speliing just in case.
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