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Showing posts with label term 3 week 5 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label term 3 week 5 2018. Show all posts

Thursday, August 23, 2018

Topic Sentience

Hi guys i'm really happy to see you guys today because I have another peace of my writing from yesterday. This writing is about topic sentences we had to choose one of the topic sentience that was writ in down. My topic sentence was "I didn't do it" I chose this one because it really effected me because i get shy when people tell me did you do it, so yeah that the reason why I chose it. I have also learnt that if there was a topic sentience the net sentience would be backing up the topic sentience. That's all I have for you today bye guys come again !!


"I didn’t do it.” Telling the teacher I didn't spilt the milk on the class room floor, was so intense. I knew who spilt it but I was to shy to tell anyone since I had to tell the teacher I didn’t do it. I felt so guilty.

The Rule of Three

Hi guys today's blog bot is so so cool, and this one is about The Three Little Pigs, Jack and The Beanstalk and Goldilocks and The Three bears. So first we were learning about the antagonist and the protagonist of the three stories, then after all that we made a Venn diagram on google drawing and post it on to our blog. Please cheek out our Venn diagrams on our blogs. Anyway after making our Venn diagram we got to make a google drawing and draw or make least 7 three things that was from the story or a sentence, it was really fun and it took a while for me to make. That's all for today bye hope you like it !!









Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Secret Shadow

Hi guys i'm so existed to show you one of my favorite stories I made last year. This one is about a girl and a boy solving a mystery even though they were young. after solving the case, they became one of the best spy in the world. anyway this story I wrote was a very good story for me, i really enjoyed it but some of my friends kinda got scared even one of the teachers "ha ha ha." So anyway that's all for today bye !!


Secret Shadow


Once upon a time there was an old scary moldy house. Lots of people made up bad stories about that house,
and one day a 16 years old girl and a 14 years old Boy
named Victoria and Jack, (they were brothers and
sisters)were walking past that house, and they heard
those Stories, that people made up.  Each day they walk past that house. There was always a sign saying do not come in. You will be going. It made the boy and girl a bit scared. “just keep on walking” said Victoria .


The Next Day
6:00 pm

When the Jack and Victoria finish their dinner they told
their parents “Mum Dad were going to diary to buy our
lunch for school” said Jack, when they left they were
lying , they were going to cheek out the old scary moldy
house. When they arrived, they were getting ready to go
inside. They had two flash lights and two pans, they
needed the pans just in case someone tries to attack
them or hurt them. They stepped inside, and it made a
crinkly noise. They walked really close to each other,
then they heard something drop, so they zoomed
there flash lights to that thing. they just kept walking.
They heard spooky noises, suddenly one windows
cracked. then they ran as fast as they can back home.
The following day
12:00


Jack and Victoria were asleep.
Then the brother woke up and told the sister
to wake up she woke up, then Jack said,
“I’m going back to that house.” he got ready and left.
Victoria said “hold up you can't go alone.” So she raced
out and catched up to Jack.


She said to Jack “if your going in I am to. So they
turned on their flashlights. They steeped in,
It made the same sound from last time. Then some
light turned on. They saw the same window that was
broken but It wasn't broken any more. It was really odd,
they saw a shadow coming near them. Then they ran
behind a wall, then there was another shadow chasing
them, Then they ran to a hallway. They had an idea it
was if they could turn off all of the lights off the
shadows well be gone. So the boy don cool tricks and
flips he even don a double flip to get to the light switch
to turn it off. One of the shadows disappeared but not
the other shadow. The sister was frozen by the shadow,
Then the brother secretly went behind the shadow and
turned of the light, then the shadow disappeared.
Suddenly the house magically turned beautiful and so
pretty. But they had to go so Jack and Victoria went
straight back home.


In The Morning
7:00


Jack and Victoria woke up they went in the kitchen,
they saw some fancy agents. They both said to their
parents “what's happening”, their parents said to the
agents “well why don’t you guys tell them, Jack and
Victoria said at the same time “ Tell us what”. The
agents told the they were hiring them to be a secret
agent. The brother and sister were so excited.
They were so happy. They jumped around and they
got their own spy clochs. Evan their own weapons.

Monday, August 20, 2018

Time Sheet Check

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog. Today's blog post is about one of my time sheet cheek, so there was 5 activity on this sheet all of them were based on time. My favorite part of this was that we had to explain how we told time in our own words. I have learnt a lot of things about this and  mean a lot, it wasn't easy for me but it was fun. I just cant wait for the next time sheet cheek we get if we do, I would like you guys to comment on what other way of telling time not like how I explained it. But anyway hope you like this blog post, please come again and thank you so much. Bye!!

Description


Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, I am really excited to show you my peace of writing I did. Today's writing is about making a clear description about our fantasy mythical being, we made up. My group was struggling to under stand that a intro is clear small and simple, it took a while for us to get it but we got it done as always. So anyway as we were writing we learnt just to glow our paragraph together, so if you were writing about the facial fetchers the next paragraph would be about the body. Then last of all to finish our writing we wrote a clear conclusion talking to our audience of what we want for them to go through just how our fantasy beings going through. That's it for today I hope you like my description, thank you bye!!


The Zoranawah ( a character I made) is a clan of mythical fantasy being based on wolf, dear and human. They live in the
glowing rain forest with their own animal to protect them.


The zoranawah lives in the glowing rain forest that has millions of vines, there are live plants and magical health plants. Every night after evening when the moon is almost up, the magical plants and animals, even the Zoranawah patterns or stripes glows at night so they can be able to see throughout the dark. This jungle is a normal day and night jungle for strange animals and beings.

The Zoranawah Is a girl that has grey eyes with cadet gray skin. There hair is very long with purple at the top then blends
in with pink to white. The ears would be wolf ears so they can hear very well just in case if there is danger approaching.
There mouths, nose and eyes are normal human being limbs.


This character has normal legs and arms, when they move their body moves with silky gentle touches,
there moves are in fact so soft they can dance in high trees and steep mountains. The Zoranawah is very flexible and spends
their  time mostly up in trees. And they have horns that are exactly like deer horns, the purpose for the horns is so they can
see without looking. Also my character has a tail, there flexible moves needs balance and that’s what the tail is for.


My characters clothing top is made out of fransen hostas leaves and vines,  fransen hostas leaves are thin and wavy that
makes it easy for them to move around. The vines help the leaves to stay in place for them to move. The bottom (a skirt) is
made out of ferns, brown thistles and vines. The thistles helps the ferns to smell nice and fresh, as again the vines help the
ferns to stay in place.


The Zoranawah also has their very own animal to fly them to high floating islands just like a normal transporter, this animal
is a white tiger with wings called a Gallon. The Jaxson has stripes like the Zorannah but the zora nawah has light cadet gray
stripes, and those stripes glow at night so they can see in the dark. Also Zoranawah has a weapon just like Maui the demigod
but smaller so whenever a angry animal comes or a mystery predator attacks, the Zoranawah can attack back with their
weapon when the Gallon isn’t with them.

The Zoranawah has a magical experience throughout their lives living in the glowing rain forest, I wish that
you could experience the same thing that the Zoranawah is going through. But since my character is a fantasy being
I made, you aren’t able to experience the things there experiencing.