Hi guys i'm so existed to show you one of my favorite stories I made last year. This one is about a girl and a boy solving a mystery even though they were young. after solving the case, they became one of the best spy in the world. anyway this story I wrote was a very good story for me, i really enjoyed it but some of my friends kinda got scared even one of the teachers "ha ha ha." So anyway that's all for today bye !!
Secret Shadow
Once upon a time there was an old scary moldy house.
Lots of people made up bad stories about that house,
and one day a 16 years old girl and a 14 years old Boy
named Victoria and Jack, (they were brothers and
sisters)were walking past that house, and they heard
those Stories, that people made up. Each day they walk past that house. There was always a sign saying do not come in. You will be going. It made the boy and girl a bit scared. “just keep on walking” said Victoria .
and one day a 16 years old girl and a 14 years old Boy
named Victoria and Jack, (they were brothers and
sisters)were walking past that house, and they heard
those Stories, that people made up. Each day they walk past that house. There was always a sign saying do not come in. You will be going. It made the boy and girl a bit scared. “just keep on walking” said Victoria .
The Next Day
6:00 pm
When the Jack and Victoria finish their dinner they told
their parents “Mum Dad were going to diary to buy our
lunch for school” said Jack, when they left they were
lying , they were going to cheek out the old scary moldy
house. When they arrived, they were getting ready to go
inside. They had two flash lights and two pans, they
needed the pans just in case someone tries to attack
them or hurt them. They stepped inside, and it made a
crinkly noise. They walked really close to each other,
then they heard something drop, so they zoomed
there flash lights to that thing. they just kept walking.
They heard spooky noises, suddenly one windows
cracked. then they ran as fast as they can back home.
their parents “Mum Dad were going to diary to buy our
lunch for school” said Jack, when they left they were
lying , they were going to cheek out the old scary moldy
house. When they arrived, they were getting ready to go
inside. They had two flash lights and two pans, they
needed the pans just in case someone tries to attack
them or hurt them. They stepped inside, and it made a
crinkly noise. They walked really close to each other,
then they heard something drop, so they zoomed
there flash lights to that thing. they just kept walking.
They heard spooky noises, suddenly one windows
cracked. then they ran as fast as they can back home.
The following day
12:00
Jack and Victoria were asleep.
Then the brother woke up and told the sister
to wake up she woke up, then Jack said,
“I’m going back to that house.” he got ready and left.
Victoria said “hold up you can't go alone.” So she raced
out and catched up to Jack.
Then the brother woke up and told the sister
to wake up she woke up, then Jack said,
“I’m going back to that house.” he got ready and left.
Victoria said “hold up you can't go alone.” So she raced
out and catched up to Jack.
She said to Jack “if your going in I am to. So they
turned on their flashlights. They steeped in,
turned on their flashlights. They steeped in,
It made the same sound from last time. Then some
light turned on. They saw the same window that was
broken but It wasn't broken any more. It was really odd,
they saw a shadow coming near them. Then they ran
behind a wall, then there was another shadow chasing
them, Then they ran to a hallway. They had an idea it
was if they could turn off all of the lights off the
shadows well be gone. So the boy don cool tricks and
flips he even don a double flip to get to the light switch
to turn it off. One of the shadows disappeared but not
the other shadow. The sister was frozen by the shadow,
Then the brother secretly went behind the shadow and
turned of the light, then the shadow disappeared.
Suddenly the house magically turned beautiful and so
pretty. But they had to go so Jack and Victoria went
straight back home.
light turned on. They saw the same window that was
broken but It wasn't broken any more. It was really odd,
they saw a shadow coming near them. Then they ran
behind a wall, then there was another shadow chasing
them, Then they ran to a hallway. They had an idea it
was if they could turn off all of the lights off the
shadows well be gone. So the boy don cool tricks and
flips he even don a double flip to get to the light switch
to turn it off. One of the shadows disappeared but not
the other shadow. The sister was frozen by the shadow,
Then the brother secretly went behind the shadow and
turned of the light, then the shadow disappeared.
Suddenly the house magically turned beautiful and so
pretty. But they had to go so Jack and Victoria went
straight back home.
In The Morning
7:00
Jack and Victoria woke up they went in the kitchen,
they saw some fancy agents. They both said to their
parents “what's happening”, their parents said to the
agents “well why don’t you guys tell them, Jack and
Victoria said at the same time “ Tell us what”. The
agents told the they were hiring them to be a secret
agent. The brother and sister were so excited.
they saw some fancy agents. They both said to their
parents “what's happening”, their parents said to the
agents “well why don’t you guys tell them, Jack and
Victoria said at the same time “ Tell us what”. The
agents told the they were hiring them to be a secret
agent. The brother and sister were so excited.
They were so happy. They jumped around and they
got their own spy clochs. Evan their own weapons.
got their own spy clochs. Evan their own weapons.
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