My Seqeunce.

W.A.L.T recall  events

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of lions are resting in the sun.
	The lion is going for the buffalo calf because it’s the runt.
	The lions and the crocodile are fighting over the calf.
	When a herd of buffaloes came to rescue their baby.
	The Buffalo herd trap the lions on the edge of the water bank.
i	The baby went under the herd to keep safe, while the buffalo chase the Lions away.

The starving of the day (first draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

The Starving Of The Day.

It was a lovely day,  so my parents and I went for a walk around the river bank, in the afternoon during september with my herd. I was happy because I was in front of the herd, but my Dad was in front of me because he was the leader of the herd.

It was a lovely day so we went for a walk, As we were walking I smell  lions ahead of as, they were chasing me because I was the weakest, BAM! As they dragged me into the water, and suddenly I can hear the crocodile want’s to eat me.  As the lions took me on the dry grass, as I can taste and feel my herd is coming, then I see my herd coming to rescue me, as I was safe under my herd.