Once upon a time, it was a beautiful view in the sky. The clouds were as puffy as cotton candy. My blue eyes were like the beautiful sky. The air was like a cooling blue fresh spa pool. I am a girl I am 12 years old and my name is Loren. I was born in a weird place, I lived in a thin house on top of a flying whale. My mother pact away when I was 3 years old. I had a friend his name was Luke he was also 12 years old as well, he was a really good friend to my mum he said he will protect me. I went outside. I was about to cry, but suddenly my friend came on his flying edvenchin.
He came to me to for help. He said his island is going away from your house, then I won’t able to live next to him. he had a plan the plan was he goes back to his home then he will bring me a rope siked to his home. Then I will tie it on a tree then his home will be always following my home. his planned worked.
15 years later.
For 15 years I have made it back to my dad, evan my friend was there, he still had my back. When we arrived. I gave a big warm hug to my dad and my 2 sisters. I was happy. But tired and it was 9:00. I tucked myself in bed. The fur of the blanket was like warm fur of a bear.
7:00. My alarm woke me up, I went to get change then I fell on the ground really hard. When I got up I went down stairs it was really quiet. When I took one step on the ground, with Luke there was decorations everywhere then, everyone jumped out and said welcome back Loren And Luke. I was surprised. My nan was there my grandpa was there my aunt and uncle was there and my cousins were there too. And one more thing I did not tell you, I am a latina. I loved dancing. my favorite dans was tap dancing so I started Tap dancing. And my fet was like that penguin in happy feet. After dancing we ate chicken, fried chips, fried rice, dumplings and rolls, and sochie. I was really full. After that It was evening. then we were watching a movie. When it was in the middle of the movie I went to sleep. When I was about to sleep I saw a car that parked next to our house. Then a man came into my house. I ran out of my room and ran down stairs. Then I saw my dad talking to this man I heard them saying that they are going to take over our house tomorrow. So I went back to sleep until the next day.
When I woke up I ran down stairs. Then I saw out the window. He was not here yet. And it was really weird, because no one was here, it was only me and Luke. Then I heard a bunch of noise coming out side, then my whole family came in, when the came in they stared at me. When I saw them they looked like spies the were all wearing black and they had some weapons in their hands. I said guy what's going on. Then my dad told me we need to talk.
My dad told me that “me and your mum were in love, also we were spies” I said to myself I knew it then my dad kept telling the story. “When me and your mum got married. This guy had a big crush on your mother, he was also a spie. But when it was within him he had bad in him. he stole 1,000000, money from the bank. Then he started fighting for your mother, but she had a baby, and that was you. But when it was 2 years later he killed your mother. And that's how your mother pact away.”
Then he said you are able to be a spie. I was so excited. Then he gave me my mother's spie clochs and weapons. Bot there was bad news next he's coming for me. Then my family. Then I brushed my teeth, I got changed, had my breakfast. And went to my dad, he told me that we are going to these people called the organisation. When we arrived every one in there was wearing fancy clochs. Then my dad was talking to the leader of the organisation about if I called join being a spy. He said yes. Then the leader of the organisation told me that, my first mission is tomorrow. He told me to be careful out there. It took like 7 hours I had to stay there. when I got back home I was really tired. Then I went back to sleep until the next day.
When I woke up I was right on time to go on my mission. My mission starts at 10:00 o’clock. And it was just 9:20,
I went to go get ready for the mission, then I got my weapons, and got change. I went into the living room and everyone was waiting for me. I said “ sorry I’m late” they said “it okay” we went In a black van. When we arrived there, it was really foggy, then all of stuten theses sisters came out of nowhere, they looked really creepy every time they talked there mouths aint moving. And there face looked like a mask. my two sisters said “well keep them distracted by fighting, and you get Eran” me and my dad went after Eran. when we got there, Eran turned around. Then he turned around and jumped, then he jumped on our swords to the other side. Then we done twist and turns.
Then he had my dad at the edge.I ran as fast as i can then push eran off the kilf. Then I helped my father up then me my dad and my sisters went back home.
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