W.A.L.T write a strong debate

W.A.L.T write a strong debate

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, so sorry if it has been a while for me to post there was just to much going on at school and family. So yeah anyway today's blog post is going to be about my intro and my evidence for my debate, and the most favorite part of this of mine is the evidence a put so much effort into it. how I did it was that I kinda change facts into evidence so I will be able to use it for my debate and hopefully it is really strong. But anyway the intro was amazing and My hook sounds perfect for me to use in the debate. But first I had to under stand the meaning of it, so I done some research on the hook I got from google. And now I finally understand the hook I got it's beautiful and understanding. So yeah that will really be it for today, hope you have learnt something from my writing and hope you have a goo day, Bye!! answer the following questions below :)

Did you under stand it? was this a bit too much for a debate? Did I have any mistakes to fix up?

write your comments in the comment section BELOW!!

we show that these cells make connections (stem) with the nervous system
of a mouse in a way that is appropriate and could mediate recovery. That’s a
big thing.’ I will be showing a big thing I care about in life and that is that I know
that the nervous system is the most indispensable, principal system of all body systems.

I know that the nervous system is the most indispensable because it tells
you when to sleep, how to eat and also how to walk. Without walking or
exercise your body goes weaker, without eating you will die and without
sleep your body  becomes like jelly. And to make that happen your brain
controls your nerves and the nerves controls the things you do in life like
movement, eating and sleep. So the key thing is your brain without it you
won't be able to breath or you won't be able to see and do things. For
example the motor nerves control the muscles to where you want it to move,
and without the motor nerves you won’t be able to move your muscles.
This is why it is the principal because it controls all systems.

Your nervous system is the key system to work all body system.
Without your nervous system all body system will not be able to work.
If the nervous system was not there your body will not be able to do anything
because the other body systems wont work. For example the motor nerves
control the muscles to where you want it to move, and without the motor
nerves you won’t be able to move your muscles. This is why it is the principal
because it controls all systems. but there is apart of your brain called the brain
stem and that is a part of a brain the dose things by itself, like your heart
beating or your lungs breathing. You don't have to say breath so you can
breath or think about breathing to breath, because the brainstem does
it automatically. And that's how part of the brain helps to work with the
nervous system.

Harry Potter Story Task

W.A.L.T: fill in our own words to complete the finishing task.

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about the Harry potter story. as you guys might know a we while ago I made a blog post about questions and answers of the harry potter story. and now the finish people who are done, get to do one more task to finish off. This task was filling in gap words to end the story off. To be honest this was easier then I thought, I really thought I was going to fail this but I got it done just in like 30 minutes. All the words that I have use were pretty good for the story, I only got 3 wrong but hey it was good enough. I am so happy for myself to Finnish something I wasn't sure of. But anyway its time to go hope you guys learnt something from this Harry Potter learning task and I really hope you guys like my story. Bye!! Answer the following questions.

Was my word good? Do you guys Understand it? Was this story fun?

Cool Facts and Evidence

W.A.L.T: make evidence for writing

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about evidence about the nervous system for the debate. these evidence are going to help me build up that I believe that the nervous system is the best system in all body system and I know that. most of these evidence were facts but I changed it up a bit so that it would be more specific. I have not yet finished this yet so my next step would be to finish this off. the pink ones are the evidence, the purple ones are going to be the facts. most of them are hooked up together cause they talk about the same thing. The dark one is me telling you how much I know that the nervous system is the best system of them all, and tells you why. so yeah that is it for today hope you guys like this blog post hope you learn something from it, Bye!!. Please answer the following questions.

Did you understand this? Was this good for you guys to learn from it?

Hotspot Doc

W.A.L.T: make our own story... La La La

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about one of my free writing. This story is
about a man who is board for life and who wanted to make his dreams come true, and those dreams
were write next to him but he didn't notice. So then he got fired at work and he finally got to do all the
things he wanted to do. Sorry to keep it short, but find out the hole story in my writing. Where I got the
idea of this story was when, I went to the movies and saw an add of a board man and he got to finally
do the things he wanted to do. But I actually added some more detail into it and more things at the end,
so keep an eye on that. So yeah that's really it for today and I really want you guys to comment on to
this if there were any mistakes, or if I did well. Answer the questions below Please. So yeah comment
down below and i'll reply. Thanks for your time and have a good day. Bye!!

Did I do well? Was this good enough to excite you? Was there any mistakes? Please drop your comments below !

At my job, i have one task. Everyday I go in, sit at my desk, and wait for a red light to turn on.
When it does, I push a button. I repeat this process until the end of my shift. One day, I find out what
the button does. That day I came out of my bed mumbling “I don't want to go to work”. As I was walking
to work I always imagined, what the hot dogs taste like and how it felt going to the beach nearby,
and hearing the whales calling out for me. Anyway I got to work late, then I went to my desk… Bep…
Bep… Bep. All I could hear was Bep… Bep.

Then all of a sudden a flash shooted into my head. Now that I know, everyday im not getting much
energy for myself when go to work. So on that day I left work without telling my boss, I mean I know
she would be angry but this is my life and I can do anything in it. So juring that day I got out of work,
then I finally got to do what I wanted. The first thing I don on that day I went to a beach nearby.

While I was there I smelt the most yummys smell in the world. I followed where the smell was
coming from. I was so excited because it was…. HOT DOGS, I bought a hole lot like 20 of them
or more and they were only $1, I brought them anyway because they were yummy. After eating all
20 of them I laid myself down waiting for the next thing to happen.

For some reason I was pretty nervous for this whole new thing in my life, then my nerves disappeared
out of thin ear because the most beautiful women I ever saw in my life, she had shining red hair,
a dashing smile on her face, and her eyes oh her eyes were like shining stars. I was able to talk to
her and have her number after our conversation, oh she was beautiful.

But anyway, I got to swim in the sparkling blue sea after talking to the girl of my life. I
was also able to swim with dolphins nearby, but that's not all, I could hear the most beautiful
sound I have ever heard of, and it was the gigantic big whales howling out to the world. I waited
until they were gone, then I had another relaxful swim, after my swim I laid down on the beach watching
the shining sunset.

The End

Intro Debate

W.A.L.T :

Hi guys welcome back to my blog I would like to say that for my blog post and my learning I have made a intro for my debate/argument. I have made a quote in my intro to hook up my audience and after that I have made a claim to tell them what I believe in most. As you guys know I have been making a lot of blog post about the nervous system because that system is the one I believe in most. But anyway the blog post under this one was just one i was still carrying on with, and this is the full product of my intro, I am so so glad and happy for myself. but before I end this blog post I would like to say if my quote was very good? Or if my full intro was clear? And last question is that did you guys understand my intro. Thanks so much that will be the end of this blog post, please leave a comment for the answer to my question. Bye !!

"Claim Debate"

W.A.L.T : work on how to start on a clear Debate

Hi guy happy to see you all again I mean I have been at Auckland for a bit. but anyway I will be showing you a paragraph of why I think the nervous system is the best system in all of the other body systems. so you guys can see that at the bottom and why we wrote that because we were getting ready to actually have a debate with another group who doesn't agree that the nervous system is the best one of all. I was really excited because I really want to talk up to someone you guys know what I mean. so yeah that's why we wrote it and that's it for today hope you guys learnt something from this blog post and hope you guys have a great day Bye!! 

Nervous System

Hi again and welcome back to my blog so glad to have you guys back and so glad to be doing another blog post. So anyway the past 2 weeks I have been learning about all body system and my favorite body system is the nervous system. I also think that the nervous system is the most main system in all body systems, so all of us had to choose a body system to go in which we thought was the best. But anyway our teacher gave us some vocabulary about our body system and we had to fine out what they mean. and at the bottom you can see a diagram of the vocabulary and what they stand for, and that's it for today hope you guys learnt something from my DLO and yeah Bye guys hope you have a good day!!

Simple Percentages for Beginners

W.A.L.T : work out discounts using fractions and percentages.

Hi guys back again and welcome back to my blog. As you guys  know I was at Auckland so i'm super excited for this next blog post. This blog post is a math video from today and it's all about percentage and a bit of some fractions, in the video I will be showing you how percentage work and what are there fractions. This DLO video will show you percentage fractions and decimal all together, and these work really really easy. I got to tell you though there are some tricks up my sleeve for the video so keep watching till the end. I'm finally so glad to see that I have now posted a math video, cause it has actually been so long since I have posted about math so yeah. So yeah I'm so proud of my self because I thought that percentage were going to be much harder then I thought, but it wasn't so I was so glad. That's it for today hope you guys have a good day and hope you guys have learnt something from my video. Bye!!

Was this DLO easy for you guys to understand and learn?

Student Summit

Hi guys me again sorry for late post been to Auckland for the past few days and I didn't get the time to post. So anyway today I went to the student summit the student summit was one of the things that I have don last year, I think I have also don a blog post about this so keep an eye on that. The thing we have been working on was different kinds of site we could use for our learning, this day was so fun having to work with so many people on so many sites. I have made new friends and awesome learning, by that I mean I was one of the people who got to share a new site with other children. I have been working on thins with Risha and I want to thank her because I was at Auckland and she was doing most of the work. So yeah that's is it for today hope you guys like this blog post and please come on again, Bye !!

Genius Hour Should be A Life Time

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is all about my genius hour protect. Why I'm post this is because this is probably the last week for my class doing genius hour, so that means there wont be as much drawing as you guys will see. So yeah it is sadly the end of genius hour and I would like to share you some of the tough thing I have been through, through out genius hour post of the time. Most of the time that it was hard for me was when I didn't have much help and that was like 2047, but I got back on track and we all changed our genius hour protect. My one was drawing all of yous should know that by now, but it is so so sad that we cant carry on with genius hour. but I get that we need more time in topic. So yeah that's all for today hope you guys like it, and please come back for more. Bye !!

Drawing

Hi again, welcome back to my blog and today's blog post is about one of my drawing I drew. This drawing was one of the first ones I have drew, so this drawing was from the start of term 2 so that was a we-while ago. I like this one because I love school and this drawing was a girl going to school if you can see that. one of my favorite parts of this drawing is the wavy long hair it looks like the sea smashing to higher ground, also I love the eyes and glass. For this drawing the body was a bit off but I still like it, I say i'll give this a 7 out of 10. But anyway thanks so much for coming onto my blog to see this, Please come again soon Bye!!

Drawing

Hi again and welcome back to my blog, and today's blog post is about some of my drawings I have done a we-while ago well just a month ago. today's drawings is just some fun drawings I drew but the last one is the best one I probably have drew out of all of my drawings. the last drawing was actually my sisters idea to draw it, this drawing has all that detail init so that's is why I like it so much. The first drawing was a pretty easy drawing I drew, I like this one because it has beautiful detail in the eyes and the mouth. These drawing are both beautiful in both ways and they are so lovely. So that is it for today please come again have a good day Bye!!

 

Drawing

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about some of my drawing I have done. These drawing were made a while ago just one month ago, the first drawing is my favorite one out of most of my drawing. I love this one because the drawing I was getting it from was a drawing from one of my favorite artist. she really inspires me to keep going with drawing, i'm sorry I cant tell you what her name is she doesn't really mention it. The last drawing I have made was a very sassy one  the really photo was amazing and the person who drew it was very very good at drawing. Anyway I want to know if you have any questions about my drawing, and that's it. Thanks for coming on to my blog hope you have a good day Bye !!

 

Body

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about 3 body systems called the Endocrine system, the Circulatory system and the skeletal system. This DLO is about 4 things I have learnt in the 3 Body systems, I'm just gonna give you a quick tip on the three systems my class worked on. The endocrine system is all about the chemicals, the Circulatory system deals with blood, pain, oxygen and germs. Last one the skeletal system the main thing is about Waite and bones. Okay that's is all I have for you guys have a good day and hope you have learnt something bye !!

the fight for a cousin

the fight for a cousin

Hi guys and today's blog post is another story I made a we-while ago. there might be some mistakes but I didn't have mach time to fix it up, this story is another scary one. I like this one because it goes back in the 19's and 18's, I wrote this because I watched a movie that inspired me to write this. I really miss reading some of my stories and writing them, I was very surprise to see my writing again. I'm really proud of myself that I have wrote this, every time I read it it's like watching a movie in my imagination. But i'm surprise I wrote this kind of writing it's not like my style, but anyway that is it for today. Please come again and have a good day. Bye!!

the fight for a cousin

One day in a beautiful kingdom a magical crowel women had strong powers in her hands. Anyway in the kingdom there was a castle with a king and queen, the mother had a baby boy. During that day the crowel women took down the kingdom, and attacked the king and queen.

Then one day a nice animal kept the baby boy safe in its territory.  Then many years past but sadly the animal past away. When the baby boy was 18. He found out there was another kingdom, with a king and queen, they were his aunt and uncle so he packed up and moved to his aunt and uncle.

3 days latter he went to practice sword fighting in a deep dark forest. As he was sword fighting he heard someone calling his name. It repeated 3 times. “Oh i forgot to tell you that the prince name is jason”. So jason called out who's there.

When he turned around, a crowel women that was floating, and had black mist around her. She asked jason i would lend you 200,0000 dollars if you help me kill your uncle. Jason said no and almost walked away, then the crowel women said i'll make you a king give you a casile and give you guards to protect you and give you 30 packs of gold. Then he turned back and said  he will take the deal.

So the crowel women said  meet me tomorrow at wilson hall. Wear you uncle is going to be… that's when jason takes his uncle down, and he will never tell anyone…..

The Next Day

When the uncle left he was about to go, then his aunt asked him where are you going so early, he said i i i'm going to sword fight. So he left to wilson hall, To kill his uncle. The crowel women gave him invisible powers and he could turn into a shadow. As the uncle went in wilson hall, it was dark and jason was a shadow so the uncle could not see him . Anyway the uncle went in and it was to dark ,so he turned on the light switch so he could see properly. But jason's cousins saw everything………….

<3 The next day <3

As well as posipal , the uncle was buried under ground. It was the next day when jason came back home. As he walked in he saw everyone with a sad face Expression. Then the two cousins came out of there rooms, there names are Loren & Phil, they were the ones who saw jason attacked their father.

As they came out they asked jason have you seen our father in a suspicious way. He said uh uh no. When everyone left  to their rooms Phil & Loren pulled him aside and said. We know what you did to our father.And we will get revenge.

So when they finished talking, jason went to the dark deep forest wear the crowel women was. As he entered the crawl  women said thank you so much for the help. As she almost faded away he shouted WAIT!!! He said where's my prize. She said oh i forgot. In one flick of her thinger it appeared. And also Loren and Phil saw what they were doing. And they had a plan there plan. Was that they go into Jason's casile tomorrow evening and there is only one way to make jason disappear is to reck his famous crown it's also good because the crowel women well disappear to.  So that's what they were going to do for their revenge.

<3 Tomorrow Evening <3

It was time for Loren and Phil's plan. They got ready. They had swords and weapons for their revenge, they were at jason's casil. he was in there sleeping, and the crowel women was in there to niting. So they wanted to do a breakable entrance, they swung from the tree and cracked open the window. The crown was right in front of them, they pulled out their swords, and tried to rect it. But the crowel women saw them and aberdeen the middle of them and protect the crown. As the put their swords in her mist. Then the mist started to sink their hands. Then they pulled out another sword and cut the mist. Then they ran back home. And never went back.

<3 Next Day Morning <3

Early on that morning jason went back to Lorens and Phil's kingdom. As he went back he really felt guilty to what he don to her father. So he turned back and never went there again.

Body

Hi guys and today was a awesome learning time for me, so as you guys know we are learning about the body system. And today's system was the Blood Circulation system, and I have learnt that the red blood cells delivers oxygen to all cells, also white blood cells fight germs, and platelets heal scratches and cuts. So yeah that's what I learned today but that's not the cool part, my class got to make our own experiment about blood. First we got a bottle of water and put in two spoons of sugar and one spoon of salt, and that's all it of your blood it's just liquid salt and sugar. So anyway we used cheerios for red blood cells, mush mallows for white blood cells and liquorice for platelets. So that's all for today hope you guys learnt something from my Blog post, please come again and have good day !! Bye !

Independent Task

W.A.L.T: use addition and subtraction to work out fractions of a set.

Hello everyone around world, This is another blog post about my independent task week 7. This independent task was hard and easy for me to do, as you guys know it was hard because I had to do it in one day since that was my goal. I'm really proud of myself and I really love doing independent task they are really fun and they make my life more challenging. That's why I like them, they have helped me improve more in my math even though I hate math. Any way hope you guys like this hope you have learnt something, and that's all for today bye guys !!

Harry Potter

Hi guys and today's blog post is about the story Harry Potter. So our teacher gave us a story of Harry Potter, after reading she gave us six or seven questions to answer. These questions are related to the Harry potter story, we had to use a part of the story to back our answer up. This was hard for me because my goal was to finish a new peace of learning in one day and post it the next day, but it was no challenge for me. Just kidding it was hard ! I wanted to make my DLO on on a new presentation site, and I chose Piktochart it was so fun for me to use and so creative. But one thing that was hard was that it took longer then I though it would be. But anyway I'm really proud of my self and I just  hope you like it, Bye !