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Showing posts with label term 3 week 9 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label term 3 week 9 2018. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 25, 2018

W.A.L.T write a strong debate


W.A.L.T write a strong debate

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, so sorry if it has been a while for me to post there was just to much going on at school and family. So yeah anyway today's blog post is going to be about my intro and my evidence for my debate, and the most favorite part of this of mine is the evidence a put so much effort into it. how I did it was that I kinda change facts into evidence so I will be able to use it for my debate and hopefully it is really strong. But anyway the intro was amazing and My hook sounds perfect for me to use in the debate. But first I had to under stand the meaning of it, so I done some research on the hook I got from google. And now I finally understand the hook I got it's beautiful and understanding. So yeah that will really be it for today, hope you have learnt something from my writing and hope you have a goo day, Bye!! answer the following questions below :)

Did you under stand it? was this a bit too much for a debate? Did I have any mistakes to fix up?
write your comments in the comment section BELOW!!



we show that these cells make connections (stem) with the nervous system
of a mouse in a way that is appropriate and could mediate recovery. That’s a
big thing.’ I will be showing a big thing I care about in life and that is that I know
that the nervous system is the most indispensable, principal system of all body systems.



I know that the nervous system is the most indispensable because it tells
you when to sleep, how to eat and also how to walk. Without walking or
exercise your body goes weaker, without eating you will die and without
sleep your body  becomes like jelly. And to make that happen your brain
controls your nerves and the nerves controls the things you do in life like
movement, eating and sleep. So the key thing is your brain without it you
won't be able to breath or you won't be able to see and do things. For
example the motor nerves control the muscles to where you want it to move,
and without the motor nerves you won’t be able to move your muscles.
This is why it is the principal because it controls all systems.


Your nervous system is the key system to work all body system.
Without your nervous system all body system will not be able to work.
If the nervous system was not there your body will not be able to do anything
because the other body systems wont work. For example the motor nerves
control the muscles to where you want it to move, and without the motor
nerves you won’t be able to move your muscles. This is why it is the principal
because it controls all systems. but there is apart of your brain called the brain
stem and that is a part of a brain the dose things by itself, like your heart
beating or your lungs breathing. You don't have to say breath so you can
breath or think about breathing to breath, because the brainstem does
it automatically. And that's how part of the brain helps to work with the
nervous system.

Thursday, September 20, 2018

Harry Potter Story Task

W.A.L.T: fill in our own words to complete the finishing task.

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about the Harry potter story. as you guys might know a we while ago I made a blog post about questions and answers of the harry potter story. and now the finish people who are done, get to do one more task to finish off. This task was filling in gap words to end the story off. To be honest this was easier then I thought, I really thought I was going to fail this but I got it done just in like 30 minutes. All the words that I have use were pretty good for the story, I only got 3 wrong but hey it was good enough. I am so happy for myself to Finnish something I wasn't sure of. But anyway its time to go hope you guys learnt something from this Harry Potter learning task and I really hope you guys like my story. Bye!! Answer the following questions.

Was my word good? Do you guys Understand it? Was this story fun?


Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Cool Facts and Evidence

W.A.L.T: make evidence for writing

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about evidence about the nervous system for the debate. these evidence are going to help me build up that I believe that the nervous system is the best system in all body system and I know that. most of these evidence were facts but I changed it up a bit so that it would be more specific. I have not yet finished this yet so my next step would be to finish this off. the pink ones are the evidence, the purple ones are going to be the facts. most of them are hooked up together cause they talk about the same thing. The dark one is me telling you how much I know that the nervous system is the best system of them all, and tells you why. so yeah that is it for today hope you guys like this blog post hope you learn something from it, Bye!!. Please answer the following questions.

Did you understand this? Was this good for you guys to learn from it?



Hotspot Doc


W.A.L.T: make our own story... La La La

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about one of my free writing. This story is
about a man who is board for life and who wanted to make his dreams come true, and those dreams
were write next to him but he didn't notice. So then he got fired at work and he finally got to do all the
things he wanted to do. Sorry to keep it short, but find out the hole story in my writing. Where I got the
idea of this story was when, I went to the movies and saw an add of a board man and he got to finally
do the things he wanted to do. But I actually added some more detail into it and more things at the end,
so keep an eye on that. So yeah that's really it for today and I really want you guys to comment on to
this if there were any mistakes, or if I did well. Answer the questions below Please. So yeah comment
down below and i'll reply. Thanks for your time and have a good day. Bye!!
Did I do well? Was this good enough to excite you? Was there any mistakes? Please drop your comments below !

At my job, i have one task. Everyday I go in, sit at my desk, and wait for a red light to turn on.
When it does, I push a button. I repeat this process until the end of my shift. One day, I find out what
the button does. That day I came out of my bed mumbling “I don't want to go to work”. As I was walking
to work I always imagined, what the hot dogs taste like and how it felt going to the beach nearby,
and hearing the whales calling out for me. Anyway I got to work late, then I went to my desk… Bep…
Bep… Bep. All I could hear was Bep… Bep.


Then all of a sudden a flash shooted into my head. Now that I know, everyday im not getting much
energy for myself when go to work. So on that day I left work without telling my boss, I mean I know
she would be angry but this is my life and I can do anything in it. So juring that day I got out of work,
then I finally got to do what I wanted. The first thing I don on that day I went to a beach nearby.


While I was there I smelt the most yummys smell in the world. I followed where the smell was
coming from. I was so excited because it was…. HOT DOGS, I bought a hole lot like 20 of them
or more and they were only $1, I brought them anyway because they were yummy. After eating all
20 of them I laid myself down waiting for the next thing to happen.


For some reason I was pretty nervous for this whole new thing in my life, then my nerves disappeared
out of thin ear because the most beautiful women I ever saw in my life, she had shining red hair,
a dashing smile on her face, and her eyes oh her eyes were like shining stars. I was able to talk to
her and have her number after our conversation, oh she was beautiful.


But anyway, I got to swim in the sparkling blue sea after talking to the girl of my life. I
was also able to swim with dolphins nearby, but that's not all, I could hear the most beautiful
sound I have ever heard of, and it was the gigantic big whales howling out to the world. I waited
until they were gone, then I had another relaxful swim, after my swim I laid down on the beach watching
the shining sunset.

The End

Monday, September 17, 2018

"Claim Debate"

W.A.L.T : work on how to start on a clear Debate

Hi guy happy to see you all again I mean I have been at Auckland for a bit. but anyway I will be showing you a paragraph of why I think the nervous system is the best system in all of the other body systems. so you guys can see that at the bottom and why we wrote that because we were getting ready to actually have a debate with another group who doesn't agree that the nervous system is the best one of all. I was really excited because I really want to talk up to someone you guys know what I mean. so yeah that's why we wrote it and that's it for today hope you guys learnt something from this blog post and hope you guys have a great day Bye!! 



Nervous System


Hi again and welcome back to my blog so glad to have you guys back and so glad to be doing another blog post. So anyway the past 2 weeks I have been learning about all body system and my favorite body system is the nervous system. I also think that the nervous system is the most main system in all body systems, so all of us had to choose a body system to go in which we thought was the best. But anyway our teacher gave us some vocabulary about our body system and we had to fine out what they mean. and at the bottom you can see a diagram of the vocabulary and what they stand for, and that's it for today hope you guys learnt something from my DLO and yeah Bye guys hope you have a good day!!


Simple Percentages for Beginners


W.A.L.T : work out discounts using fractions and percentages.
Hi guys back again and welcome back to my blog. As you guys  know I was at Auckland so i'm super excited for this next blog post. This blog post is a math video from today and it's all about percentage and a bit of some fractions, in the video I will be showing you how percentage work and what are there fractions. This DLO video will show you percentage fractions and decimal all together, and these work really really easy. I got to tell you though there are some tricks up my sleeve for the video so keep watching till the end. I'm finally so glad to see that I have now posted a math video, cause it has actually been so long since I have posted about math so yeah. So yeah I'm so proud of my self because I thought that percentage were going to be much harder then I thought, but it wasn't so I was so glad. That's it for today hope you guys have a good day and hope you guys have learnt something from my video. Bye!!

Was this DLO easy for you guys to understand and learn?