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Wednesday, September 19, 2018

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W.A.L.T: make our own story... La La La

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog, today's blog post is about one of my free writing. This story is
about a man who is board for life and who wanted to make his dreams come true, and those dreams
were write next to him but he didn't notice. So then he got fired at work and he finally got to do all the
things he wanted to do. Sorry to keep it short, but find out the hole story in my writing. Where I got the
idea of this story was when, I went to the movies and saw an add of a board man and he got to finally
do the things he wanted to do. But I actually added some more detail into it and more things at the end,
so keep an eye on that. So yeah that's really it for today and I really want you guys to comment on to
this if there were any mistakes, or if I did well. Answer the questions below Please. So yeah comment
down below and i'll reply. Thanks for your time and have a good day. Bye!!
Did I do well? Was this good enough to excite you? Was there any mistakes? Please drop your comments below !

At my job, i have one task. Everyday I go in, sit at my desk, and wait for a red light to turn on.
When it does, I push a button. I repeat this process until the end of my shift. One day, I find out what
the button does. That day I came out of my bed mumbling “I don't want to go to work”. As I was walking
to work I always imagined, what the hot dogs taste like and how it felt going to the beach nearby,
and hearing the whales calling out for me. Anyway I got to work late, then I went to my desk… Bep…
Bep… Bep. All I could hear was Bep… Bep.


Then all of a sudden a flash shooted into my head. Now that I know, everyday im not getting much
energy for myself when go to work. So on that day I left work without telling my boss, I mean I know
she would be angry but this is my life and I can do anything in it. So juring that day I got out of work,
then I finally got to do what I wanted. The first thing I don on that day I went to a beach nearby.


While I was there I smelt the most yummys smell in the world. I followed where the smell was
coming from. I was so excited because it was…. HOT DOGS, I bought a hole lot like 20 of them
or more and they were only $1, I brought them anyway because they were yummy. After eating all
20 of them I laid myself down waiting for the next thing to happen.


For some reason I was pretty nervous for this whole new thing in my life, then my nerves disappeared
out of thin ear because the most beautiful women I ever saw in my life, she had shining red hair,
a dashing smile on her face, and her eyes oh her eyes were like shining stars. I was able to talk to
her and have her number after our conversation, oh she was beautiful.


But anyway, I got to swim in the sparkling blue sea after talking to the girl of my life. I
was also able to swim with dolphins nearby, but that's not all, I could hear the most beautiful
sound I have ever heard of, and it was the gigantic big whales howling out to the world. I waited
until they were gone, then I had another relaxful swim, after my swim I laid down on the beach watching
the shining sunset.

The End

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