Intro Debate

W.A.L.T :

Hi guys welcome back to my blog I would like to say that for my blog post and my learning I have made a intro for my debate/argument. I have made a quote in my intro to hook up my audience and after that I have made a claim to tell them what I believe in most. As you guys know I have been making a lot of blog post about the nervous system because that system is the one I believe in most. But anyway the blog post under this one was just one i was still carrying on with, and this is the full product of my intro, I am so so glad and happy for myself. but before I end this blog post I would like to say if my quote was very good? Or if my full intro was clear? And last question is that did you guys understand my intro. Thanks so much that will be the end of this blog post, please leave a comment for the answer to my question. Bye !!