Comic Story

On Trem 4 we have been working on a comic in our writing. and i hope

you like my comic. we had to make our comic simple, because if 

it was to big it will not fit on our blog. and i hope

you like my comic.

The Lie

On Term 4 we have been working on something like a poem. And it's about

someone saying a lie about you, and then we had to write the truth about it.

And then we had to get an appropriate photo for the background and post it on our blog.  

Shgort Tailed Bat

On term 4 we have been reading about short tailed bats. And also

our teacher said we can make a slide, or something

ells about a short tailed bat, there is facts and things you 

can find out in this slide show.

The Earthqake

On term 4 we had to make a slide show or something ells 

about the earthquake. We were safe in Christchurch when the

earthquake happen, it was really bad. And you can fined

out more in the slide show.

shard lunch

On term 4 on Monday, we were cooking fruit smoothies, zucchini crisps and Kebabs.

Some people got to go shopping for the ingredients. When everything 

finished cooking, we were able to eat all the food. We also got to eat three kinds of bread, 

and some bowls of salad. 

Nutrition

A couple of weeks ago we were working on nutrition.
It means what you eat. We had to make a poster 

to tell 4 and 5 years old how you can eat healthy, but you can

eat a little treat.

Space Chimp To Death

I am really proud of what I have done in my writing.

 this was my bestes writing that I done this year.

and Im going to keep up with this kind of writing. And I hope you like this slide.

Space Chimp To Death

Space Chimp To Death (First Draft)

THis is my first draft for my narrative story called 'Space Chimp to Death'. Next week I will be editing this and making improvements.

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.

• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.

• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In 1961 I had to go up to space in a rocket, I was just a young chimp to go but I had to go, anyways my name is Larry. I said “oeaa” which mens good bye Brax, he is my trainer but really he's like a father to me. He gave me a photo of me  and him, so I can remember him. I was nervous and scared to go, 3 2 1…. Launch. BOOM!!! My heart was beating so fast, the rocket was shaking and rumbling, I was scared I wouldn’t survive. I was going to space because I was learning how to control a rocket ship and it was a challenge for me. But something happened with the rocket ship, and there were a family of mice in the rocket, and they broke the buttons to control the Rocket ship. Luckily I was a good fixer, so I fixst the rocket ship, but I knew it was winter, so I went to sleep I was sleeping like sleeping beauty…..         

65 Years Later

Beep beep beep!!! I woke up and then I was looking at the photo,  I saw the shining star’s and they look like emeralds. Then I saw the milky way, it has green and blue and all kinds of colors, it was dark. I was very old, I have long white weskers, and I have a wrinkly face. Until I saw the thing I was looking for along time it was earth, it was like a ball with green, blue and white swirls of paint on it. Then I was landing in the middle of earth,  the rocket was shaking like the first time when I was lunching off to space in 1961. It was landing roughly, then my parachute went up then I was landing softly on the ground.  

 I arrived the door opened. Shooo!!! It was not the thing that I was looking for, there is dust everywhere, the trees were burnt, and know one was there. one tear came slowly down my cheek. I think they went up to space to find me. But I’m really ANGRY with them, they left our world like a junk of dead rat’s, they left a waste. The photo was in my hands, I dropped it then I dug a holl in the ground, then I bared it then I put a big rock over it. I went in my rocket ship….

But I heard something, then the ground was shaking. I looked back, I saw a stampede of ape’s. They knocked over my rocket ship. Then I ask them “who is your leader?” Then a big big big ape came to me, I said “are you the leader of the ape’s?” He said “yes I am”. but with a deep deep deep voice. He looked at me with an angry face, I don’t know why but he showed me a photo. I said “you know this guy?” “Yes” he said. But then I vember the leader of the ape’s, when we were young we were bff’s. I was angry with them, It wasn’t  the humans that left a waste it was the apes. I akst “where Is brax!!!”. I shouted. He said he’s locked up in a cage, then I stepped in a booby trap, I was locked in a cage just like Brax. Then there was smoke everywhere it was Braxs wife and pet chimp, then they grabbed their ropes and tied them on burnt trees, they swung to us, then they got me and Brax out of the cage. The leader shouted “Attack!!!” then we gave the ape’s poison fruit’s, then they all died. Then all four of us killed the leader of the ape’s. Then we all went to live in New Zealand where it was safe…. But we never knew about the leader's son. He went out of his room, he saw his father dead on the ground. He said i’ll kill those human’s for you dad, then he finished his rocket that he was making for 20 years, he hopped inside his rocket then he followed the track of the smoke…..

2 years later

He arrived in New Zealand. But he found where they live, he knocked on the door, he was holding a big big big big gun, he was waiting……    

Will they survive or not…. Don Don Don !!!

blessing math solving

W.A.L.T: use different strategies to solve division facts

i'm going to use stage 4 repeated addition 

and stage 6 times tables.And how to solve it and im going to solve 45 Divided by 5=...

ans I think I my have to use a bit of a harder question like 65 Divided by 4=...

and I think this question was a bit easy.

prefixe worlds before

Blessing's Vocabulary Word Wall

This is my Vocabulary Word Wall

Space Chimp Narrative Planning

This is my planning for my narrative story I will be writing.

My Lerning Goals 2016

All about Blends

 W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Second Draft

The starving of the day

It was a lovely day,  so my parents and I went for a walk around the river bank in the afternoon during September  22nd. Why? Because it was our favorite day to have fun,  I was happy because I was in front of the herd, but my dad was in front of me, because he was the leader of the herd. I was going to celebrate something fun but suddenly as we were walking I smelled  lions ahead of us. ‘

They were chasing me because I was the weakest then, BAM!!! As they dragged me into the water,  suddenly a crocodile appeared and it wanted to eat me too. The lions and the crocodile were having a tug of war with me, the lion’s won. Then the lions pulled me as hard as they could, and they took me on to the dry brown grass. Oh no, they were about to eat me!  Luckily I could see my herd coming to rescue me, then I went under my herd to keep safe. While my herd chased them away, I went back home with my parents.

I felt SO shocked that this day has came to me, it was a big day.

By Blessing

My Seqeunce.

W.A.L.T recall  events

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of lions are resting in the sun.
	The lion is going for the buffalo calf because it’s the runt.
	The lions and the crocodile are fighting over the calf.
	When a herd of buffaloes came to rescue their baby.
	The Buffalo herd trap the lions on the edge of the water bank.
i	The baby went under the herd to keep safe, while the buffalo chase the Lions away.

The starving of the day (first draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

The Starving Of The Day.

It was a lovely day,  so my parents and I went for a walk around the river bank, in the afternoon during september with my herd. I was happy because I was in front of the herd, but my Dad was in front of me because he was the leader of the herd.

It was a lovely day so we went for a walk, As we were walking I smell  lions ahead of as, they were chasing me because I was the weakest, BAM! As they dragged me into the water, and suddenly I can hear the crocodile want’s to eat me.  As the lions took me on the dry grass, as I can taste and feel my herd is coming, then I see my herd coming to rescue me, as I was safe under my herd.